The Breath of Life - (Aware Stage) - Forum Game

Vote 1 : these things fish have to move (Belgium I cannot believe I forgot the English term for it how are they called ??)
Vote 2 : better hearing

Alright, the next round will be up in a few hours, I need some time to ponder what serialkiller actually wants.

Oars? Propellers? The shear power of thought?

Oh, well Im going to sleep regardless, but do not fret, it will be up soonish!

EDIT: I should probably stop posting so much in my own thread, thats a symptom of loneliness. 

Round 3 – The Red Dawn
The oasis that was once the tropical waters is rapidly fading from view. The bottom dwelling microbes are in small supply, and the only hope for the future of the proto-worms is to either find a new food source, or rise from their dark and damp sand banks. The first test to separate the ambitious from the unworthy…

NPC

Species: Gremus Physcel
Status= Extinct
Habitat= Tropical ocean sand banks
Role= Bottom feeder
Diet= Microbes
Reproduction= Sexual
Size= 0.3 mm in length
Description: The species that gave life to its descendants has finally been overshadowed by them. After waiting too long to evolve, its numbers decreased exponentially. This creature was the start of something magnificent, and ultimately had to give its life for the advancement of it.

blackink

Fins= 2
Basic Spinal Cord= 3

Species: Inkus Corticus
Status= Least Concern
Habitat= Tropical ocean sand banks
Role= Bottom feeder
Diet= Microbes and Small Plants
Reproduction= Sexual
Size= 0.4 mm in length
Description: This organism has evolved small protrusions at its sides. These are thought to be half developed fins. They however cannot be moved, creating drag when the creature moves. It’s ability to eat different food sources than it’s relatives cancels out this mishap. It also attempted to develop a very primitive nerve running along its back. It is not advanced enough to have any actual effect on the species.

ostrich

Improved digestion system= 4
Teeth= 3

Species: Strutionum Vermis
Status= Threatened
Habitat= Tropical ocean sand banks
Role= Bottom feeder
Diet= Microbes and Small plants
Reproduction= Sexual
Size= 0.3 mm in length
Description: After developing a small chamber in which its food can sit and digest, this gives the creature a wider pallet. It also developed tiny calcified lumps in its mouth, to tear off miniscule chunks of moss and other small photosynthesizing plants. This gives the creature a sturdy future, and allows it to survive the coming microbe famine.

cookieingotbr

Improved digestive system= 2
Improved circulatory= 3

Species: Cookillium Vermus
Status= Vulnerable
Habitat= Tropical ocean sand banks
Role= Bottom feeder
Diet= Microbes
Reproduction= Sexual
Size= 0.3 mm in length
Description: Cookillium for some odd reason has made it’s digestive tract narrower. As a result, food cannot fit through as easily. This species has also developed a tiny organ that can be considered a heart, only, it is not linked up with anything. It sits there uselessly.



BiologicalSomething

Teeth= 6
Fins or at least something similar= 3

Species: Srik’lini
Status= Threatened
Habitat= Tropical ocean sand banks
Role= Bottom feeder
Diet= Microbes and Small Plants
Reproduction= Sexual
Size= 0.6 mm in length
Description: Srik’lini has developed large hardened calcium lumps that are significantly sharper than other fellow proto-worm’s. This allows it to tear apart and then digest moss to a certain degree. It lacks the digestive abilities that would fully extract all nutrients from the moss, however. It also evolved small fins that hold no purpose due to their size, but do not have any negative effect.

serialkiller🌴

Better hearing: 6
Fins: 4

Species: TBA (please choose a name)
Status= Vulnerable
Habitat= Tropical ocean sand banks
Role= Bottom feeder
Diet= Microbes
Reproduction= Sexual
Size= 0.3 mm in length
Description: This organism has finally started evolving in its own direction, developing primitive internal otoliths to detect incoming vibrations. This allows it to detect not only with sight, but with hearing whether or not a creature is nearby. It also developed small fin like appendages that aid in speed and manoeuvrability.

Immortal_Dragon

Chemoreceptors, preferably around the mouth= 4
Open circulatory system= 2

Species: Cookillium Veritas
Status= Vulnerable
Habitat= Tropical ocean sand banks
Role= Bottom feeder
Diet= Microbes
Reproduction= Sexual
Size= 0.3 mm in length
Description: This organism has evolved primitive chemoreceptors around the mouth to supposedly ‘taste’ it’s food. It could aid in distinguishing between foods, but at this size, it's actual purpose is unknown. It’s circulatory system has remained unchanged.


PS: Due to the large amount of people playing, from now on people wanting to play will have to ask, and will be put on a waiting list.

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Mutation 1: Develop a gut for more proper digestion

Mutation 2: Increased size.

Mootait wan-Make the fins fin well
Mootait tuo-Simple/Improved digestive tract (depends on whether or not we started with one, can't be bothered to press the number 1 at the top and check)

Also, "QuMingeyCratter is technically not my username I think, so try just MingeyCratter and see how far that gets you, krab.

Brazilian portuguese 
(I forgot to use google translate.)

I want to change the name of my worm to cookillium thrivus
vote1: improve the nervous system