cookieingotbr
Sentient
one day I'll finish my page in thrive universe, someday ... or not
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Post by cookieingotbr on Oct 14, 2017 23:13:01 GMT
zedronsare highly intelligent creatures, but with physical limitations such as weak bones, poor musculature and poor circulatory system
planet: your planet is hedrox III is relatively a little small, but what is necessary for life to develop(stay somewhere sciocont middle)
technologies: beam of hádrons: is a technology with medium power able to drill the hull of the enemy ships modular armor: an armor that gives protection to zedrons in oxygen-free planets, low medium pressure \ high medium, high radiation and unbearable temperatures
form of government: monarchy
diet: herbivore
Life Expectancy: 90 years
Population: 57 billion (distributed among 7 planets)
rebellion: there is a planet called drazur that reuniuram a series of rebels in 19 ase that are titled the order of the light fighting against the monarchy
Religion: They whorship only one god : Liankeus the god of life, known for its peculiar appearance
reproduction: they reproduce in special grandulae in the toes
Height: 1,70 - 1,90m
Weight: 60- 70 kg
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Post by ostrich on Oct 14, 2017 23:57:02 GMT
4.5 billion among 7 planets is tiny.
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kawuit
Multicellular
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Post by kawuit on Oct 15, 2017 0:12:52 GMT
Race: Hyvra Biological Description: Hyvra´s have a triangular shaped head with an eliptic shaped nose on the top and two circular ears on each side of the pointy side. On their cheeks are fine hairy quills, who are used for recognising changes in the enviroment. For an example: Wildfire,Tornado, Earthquakes and so on. Their appeareance is almost mammalian to insectoid like, while some parts of their skin is that of a dolphin, the belly itself has small chitin plates on the back and the front. The horns on their side neck have a special abillity to store certain positve chemicals in their body and if by chance all of the life systems are going down, the chemicals will be activated - thus stitching the body of the Hyvra back together.The holes in their legs and arms are used for circulating the air through their body, allowing the Hyvra´s to run for a very long time or for travelling to high places. Hyvras can also have abominations mostly on their eyes, as long as it won´t damage the brain. Evolution: Their kind once splitted up from a group of semi sentient Axolotl like creatures called the maptuar. The split must have occured approximately around 5 to 4 million years ago, before the awakening of humankind. Home planet: Elem´tur (destroyed) near the center of our galaxy Planet atm: Duan (somewhere at sirius) Old Location: Inner Sciocont Current Location: Middle Tenebrarum Lifespan: 70 Diet:Omnivore Reproduction: They have hidden genitals in their mouth in a special jaw chamber. Height: 1,80 - 2,10m Weight: 50- 60 kg Religion: They whorship only one god (same name as their destroyed Homeworld) He is also known as the "God with the golden eyes" and has a cross shaped skull with 4 eyes at each tip and 4 mouths at the inside of the cross. Currency: Kien (k´shien) - painted fangs from hunted creatures. Red and orange are the highest wealth in their society, while yellow,purple and green are in the middle, blue,cyan and grey have the lowest wealth. Language: Vao - "ap´tesh mir Hyvra" , which translates to: ap (we) tesh (are) mir (the - person form, used for creatures and races) Hyvra. Behavior towards other races: Currently aware (otherwise they are a welcoming and curios race). Dawn of ASE: 2100 Backstory - The tragic fate: Between the year 2700 and 800, the Hyvra had to witness a massive defeat from outer space.Without a warning a massive army of unkown spaceships,half metal -half organic, attacked their homeplanet Elem´tur causing deaths for many of the Hyvra´s. They fought very hard for about 10 days, but had to realize soon enough that they were completly outmatched by the destructive force and size of the battleships. When the enemy landed the finishing blow of their planet, the Hyvra´s couldn´t do anything but to flee to a secret outpost, which was used for scientific research back then. As they fled with the Stylko´ras, they witnessed the destruction of the Biosphere from Elem´tur getting blown away like dust.
Old population count from 2740: 1.5 Billion
Current population count: 234000 thousand
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cookieingotbr
Sentient
one day I'll finish my page in thrive universe, someday ... or not
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Post by cookieingotbr on Oct 15, 2017 0:55:44 GMT
4.5 billion among 7 planets is tiny. I updated it and see if it got better
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Post by crodnu on Oct 15, 2017 1:32:53 GMT
Malak (planet):
A planet similar to Earth, except sligthly more humid and a bit colder. The sentient life on the planet (the Atrijans, see below) lives in nomadic tribes mostly, with very few coties scattered around the planet, in the most fertile areas mainly. However, the planet has been visited by alien life (or droids, i haven't decided yet), which have interacted with the local tribes and migth even have allowed military technology to be leaked to them. It has no grass (just like dinosaurs time Earth). (Still working on the planet, it's mostly a placeholder yet). Ganets (aware, non-sentient omnivores):
An animal indigenous to Malak, the Ganets are mammals who present similarities to Earth's rats, boars, buffalos and horses. They are about the size of an adult cow (TODO: put cow dimensions here), and sligthly smarter than a dog (so above human). They eat mostly fruits, leaves, and small animals, although they are also scavengers if the opportunity arises. Ganets have been domesticated, and there are differences between the wild ganets and the domestic one (being in fact two different species) For example, wild ganets are territorial and aggresive, while domestic ones are friendly and loyal (at least with whoever it recognizes as friendly, caution is adviced when approaching one). Domestic ganets can be used as mounts, having a good balance of speed and stamina, and being reasonably obedient. Atrijans (sentient omnivores):A sentient species indigenous to Malak, the atrijans are a species with a lot of resemblances to Earth's octopodes, having evolved from a creature not too different from said mollusk. Unlike the octopus, however, they are land vertebrates, and have a more elongated shape (see below). On their own they're almost unable to move, being only able to crawl, and only small dustances before tiring. However, they compensate for that by being excellent riders, especially of the ganets, which has been used as their ride for hundreds of thousands of year througth their evolution, and creating a symbiotic relationship between them. It's very unlikely to find an Atrijan without a ganet around, however, they can also ride other animals (especially on war times). Due to this, they have high reflexes and good distance perception. They live mainly on their homeplanet of Malak, where they live in nomadic tribes, however some of them have been captured by space pirates, being used as battle tralls, their skill and brutality being valued in raids. The tribes are extremely xenophobic (but not isolationist) towards eachother, and wage war between themselves on a regular basis, atrijans practice slavery and cannibalism on the people they conquer. They are in a similar intellectual level to humans, but, on average, they are less analytic and logical and more creative and intuitive. They reproduce by laying small eggs, which are fertilized externally on a body of water. This process is usually done by the whole tribe, and handled by the clergy (especially if the tribe's religion has a fertility god in it). Due to this, it's almost impossible to determine the parents of a particular atrijan, which makes the existence of nobility rigths by birth impossible. Instead, their society is highly meritocratic, with only the stronger and more cunning (and luckier) individual being chieftains. It's also a very common occurence to have a strong warrior or good ruler being declared a "god's children", since it's hard to prove otherwise. Image of an atrijan naked warrior riding a ganet to battle: (The ring on the ganet's tusk is made of a narcotic weed, used to calm it by litting it o n if it becomes uneasy, a common trait in the atrijan cultures).
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Post by ostrich on Oct 16, 2017 4:27:27 GMT
The Khi system is located in the Middle Tenebrarum Khi is a red giant with 1 habitable world and 1 previously habitable world that was rendered inhospitable after it expanded enough to boil the oceans away. Khi I Khi I is a small planet that is evaporating from the heat of the star. Khi II Khi II was once home to a civilisation that was equal to that of the humans in the early 21st century they died out after Khi expanded and boiled away their oceans. Khi III Khi III was once uninhabitable but since Khi expanded it is now in the Goldilocks zone and is now habitable. Life was seeded on Khi III by a long dead rover that wasn't sterilized correctly. Khi IV a large gas giant with 70+ moons. Khi V a large rocky world covered in ice. Khi VI a small planet with a thick atmosphere and oceans of liquid methane.
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Post by StealthStyleL on Oct 17, 2017 22:25:26 GMT
Lanky Giraffe, @minegamer17, mitobox, TheGraveKnight, kawuit, crodnu, ostrich, @cookieingbotr all have their applications passed. Please make your wiki pages and alert us here when you have made them so we can add them. @redhawk, we think 1000 years might be a bit too much. I think around 500 might be the limit of our acceptance. BiologicalSomething, your creatures are a little large and love too long to be reasonable. @robotrannicrex, we don't think your application is serious enough for the TU. gabriel0829, yours are fine except you can't harvest stars.
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TheGraveKnight
Spacefaring
The Motivational Army is watching
Posts: 1,170
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Post by TheGraveKnight on Oct 17, 2017 22:32:37 GMT
StealthStyleL When you say it got approved you mean the Mi'Riki right?
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RoboTrannic
Spacefaring
haunting deviantart
Posts: 1,005
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Post by RoboTrannic on Oct 17, 2017 22:42:08 GMT
understood i didn't think it was gonna get in anyway
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Post by mitobox on Oct 19, 2017 6:17:44 GMT
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Post by ostrich on Oct 20, 2017 3:53:50 GMT
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Post by Just a Dude on Oct 20, 2017 4:38:08 GMT
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Post by Lanky Giraffe on Oct 20, 2017 18:27:05 GMT
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Shiro
Multicellular
Living teapot
Posts: 10
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Post by Shiro on Oct 21, 2017 20:38:23 GMT
Miteris (Hot terrestrial planet)
Description: Miteris is a hot terrestrial planet with around 77% of its surface covered in water. It has a single giant mass of land and many smaller islands. All the lifeforms on Miteris came from a single organism brought to the planet by an unknown alien race. The north of the planet is dominated by blue colored plants and the south by orange ones; rainforests, deserts and savannas are the most common biomes to encounter in the planet, the coldest places on Miteris are the northern mountain chains, which are also the highest places on Miteirs. It orbits the star Ateras and has a single moon called Avigo.
Gravity: 1.2g
Moon(s): Avigo
Rotational Period: 18 hours
Orbital Period: 334.5 earth days (8.028 hours)
Pek'in (Avian, sapient carnivore)
Homeplanet: Miteris
Description: Tall birds with long legs and necks, their bright orange and yellow collors blend with the vegetation of their natural habitat, they have vestigial wings with fingers. Their diet is based mostly on fish and smaller birds, but it may include other small creatures; to suit this diet their beaks have adapted a shape optimal for both fishing and stabbing. Pek'ins vocal cords are capable of producing and mimicking many different sounds, they use this to attract and/or distract animals. The fertilization of their eggs occurs externally.
Backstory: Around 3 billion years after Miteris was seeded with life pek'ins arose. They started to create their first tools and to live in wooden platforms elevated from the ground, when the alien race that brought life to the planet comes back to check on the lifeforms. Pek'ins mistake the aliens' spaceship for a giant metallic bird. The aliens come back many more times with a few thousand years inbetween, noticing this pek'ins then proceed to see their spaceship as a deity. The aliens create a base in Miteris' moon and start to check on the lifeforms more frequently. When suddenly, complications happen on their homeworld. The alien race is now extinct.
Pek'ins are divided in southern and northern tribes, the southern tribes are the original ones, located in the same orange forests pek'ins first rose from. The northern tribes are formed mostly by pek'ins that were exiled from the south. Domestication is wildly practtised amongst the northern pek'ins.
Religion: Pek'ins main religion revolves around how the moon deity, Tala, banished her siblings to the moon but with her disappearence, the nine deities are now free. The deities demand offerings in exchange of not causing natural disasters.
Finshor ( aquatic, sapient omnivore) Homeplanet: Miteris
Description: They are 1.8 meters long blue fish, with two dorsal fins and two pairs of fingered flippers, they have a cyan colored mark on their tails, and their underside is a bluish purple. Their heads resemble that of reptiles. They are able to crawl on land for a short amount of time but have to quickly return to the ocean.
Backstory: Ever since they created their first coral and stone tools, finshores have been greatly interested in weapons. Around 988 years after their first tools were created, finshores settled down and started to cultivate different species of coral, algae and seaweed. Near the same timespan they have also began to farm many species of mollusks. Nealy 270 years after mastering agriculture, they have finally developed what one may call somewhat advanced cities. But, although living in a society, seahogs still possess their agressiveness and tribalistic behavior. With so many rival cities surging, through some very silly conflict, a war started, and then many others after that first one. Recently, they have come in contact with another sapient species from Miteris, a desert dwelling worm species, after further interaction, the finshores and the worms stablished a trade route. The seahogs now finally have access to metal tools.
(is 3 pages and a categorie ok?)(also i'm still working on the backstories srry if its bad)
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Post by Pearlfection on Oct 24, 2017 1:58:59 GMT
STAR: ObusDescription:Obus is a moderately large star located in the Outer Seregon arm region of the galaxy, closer to the tip of the arm.
It has Seven planets orbiting it, including two green, twin gas giants (Taito and Turundi, named after the Sakolo Shaman twins of ancient lore), It also has 3 smaller rocky planets (uninhabitable without terraforming) and 1 large rocky planet named Kinthe, and a smaller gas planet located near the outskirts of the system. The Obus system is owned by the Sakolo's Empire named Taratek. PLANET: KintheDescription: Kinthe is a large, rocky planet located in the Obus System, it is home to the Sakolo species. It is mostly flatlands and swamps, the rest being oceans, lakes, rivers, mountain ranges, and smaller biomes.
SEVERAL IMAGES OF KINTHE: including its moon, Kinos:
Climate:
Kinthe is a moderately warm planet, and has barely any seasonal change. Kinthan Summers and winters are very mild. The highest temperatures recorded on Kinthe were 90-98 degrees farenheit. Perfect for this planet's evolution of ectothermic creatures.Population:
The Planet is home to mostly fish, amphibian, and reptile animal species, many of the reptiles have evolved the ability to fly in order to hunt or find suitable nesting grounds. Kinthe is mostly wilderness despite its ideal landscape. There are only a few major supercities inhabited by Sakolo due to conservation laws on the planet.
Kinthe's Globally represented Animal species is the Bog Prowler, which is a highly revered and protected carnivore. Notable features: The Highest mountain range on Kinthe, Mount Krekoria, is probably one of the most bizarre features on the planet,It is 60 percent higher than Mount Everest, and diagonally crosses the planet's equator. It is surrounded by nothing but plains and grasslands, but a single lake rests on the southwest side of the mountain, and is also the deepest lake on Kinthe. SPECIES: SakoloPhysical Description:
The Sakolo are an unusually brightly colored, carnivorous sapient species, their color is determined after metamorphosis. It is said that before the Sakolo became sapient, they were able to change their color and pattern at will in order to communicate, much like a chameleon, but the ability was long forgotten. They have a long, reptilian head like a pterodactyl, with four blank, pupil-less eyes, and a long black tongue. They have Webbed hands, and clawed feet. Their tails are just a small pointed nub. The most interesting feature about the Sakolo is their feathery head crest and dense, long shoulder feathers. Culture:
The Sakolo are dedicated to the ways of non-destructive Science and Research. A common thing for a group of Sakolo friends to do is to discuss new advances in their own personal learning, and they love trivia. Modern adult Sakolo spend much of their day working at their jobs, and much like human teenagers, spend a lot of time gaming. Their sport is Holo-Gaming, A high tech video game with projections and virtual reality in a single portable console. They also have multi purpose Holographic tablets.Life Cycle:
The Sakolo undergo metamorphosis, much like frogs. When they hatch from the egg, they are nothing but green, limbless larvae with the distinct long face and four eyes. Over time, they begin to develop arms, which them allows the larvae to interact with the world around them (while staying in water of course). Then their tail begins to split into legs, this is an awkward teenage phase. Once they emerge from the water, they molt for a final time, revealing their new color and pattern! The Sakolo reproduce by laying jelly-encased eggs. Modern Sakolo can live for an average of 144 years!Specialized Technology:
The Sakolo have invented mobile tanks for their children, in the form of hovering robots. These robots have several purchasable modules to attach to the casing, the most popular module is the arm module, allowing Sakolo larvae to manipulate objects outside of the water. (And of course the parents get the joy of their child's giggling and happiness)Leaders:
The Sakolo have a group of leaders called the Architects. The Architects are the ones who plan how the Taratek empire will progress, they plan terraforming parties, colonization teams, and research teams to explore new, uninhabited planets. The Architects then assemble a poll. if there is a majority vote for colonization, then the Architects build the new colony. There is no Gender bias within this group. meaning that qualifying Male and Female Sakolo are both equally likely to be awarded this rank. Misc:
In the distant Past, Sakolo believed in things like magic. and the tribe's Shaman would always be the leader, but there was once a rare occasion of twin Sakolo, two Sakolo larvae in one egg. These twins were the most famous Sakolo in Kinthe's history, Taito and Turundi. Whose names were given to the twin gas Giants in the Obus System. Taito and Turundi led their tribe across a near worldwide mission to convert the savages, gathering millions of members across three continents. At the base of Mount Krekoria, Taito and Turundi were brutally murdered as a sacrifice to the savages who only pretended to be converted. The converts immediately banished the murderers for killing their leaders. Taito and Turundi's bodies were, soon recovered and given a proper cremation, and as a tribute, their faces were carved in Mount Krekoria's cliffs, pointing upward to symbolize thankfulness and love.
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Post by StealthStyleL on Oct 24, 2017 10:20:39 GMT
Pearlfection , your application has been approved, you can go ahead and make your page. Shiro , I forgot it was you that made the Pek'In. Anyway, the first two sections are good and you can make them. The third has a couple of things I wanna clear up. Are the sea hogs the same as the Finshor. Also, what are these worm creatures? Are they sapient? Oh, and thanks for submitting those pages guys.
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Post by redhawk007 on Oct 24, 2017 11:21:25 GMT
Species:
Name: Rag'Ill'Vol
Diet: Carnivor
Age: 60
Size: The Rag'Ill'Vol is the largest known creature on Rag, An Enourmous insect like creature that lives in Rags oceans Its only 60 feet in diameter and about 400 feet long. These creatures are the biggest reason Rag'Kor never traversed the oceans.
Description: These insects have legs still that they use to walk on the ocean floor when they arent swimming. It is speculated that it also uses this to grab onto prey. It has been known to grab onto ships and pull them under so it could make a nest out of the wreck.
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Shiro
Multicellular
Living teapot
Posts: 10
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Post by Shiro on Oct 24, 2017 13:47:19 GMT
Pearlfection , your application has been approved, you can go ahead and make your page. Shiro , I forgot it was you that made the Pek'In. Anyway, the first two sections are good and you can make them. The third has a couple of things I wanna clear up. Are the sea hogs the same as the Finshor. Also, what are these worm creatures? Are they sapient? Oh, and thanks for submitting those pages guys. Yeah, seahog is just another name for the finshor, should've made that more clear. About the worm, yeah, they're sapient, and they were the ones more active in the establishment of the trade route. I'm going to submit them too, I just need to work a little bit more on their stuff, I'm gonna try to submit them today.
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Post by StealthStyleL on Oct 24, 2017 14:04:10 GMT
Ok, then it is fine to go ahead and make that a page.
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gabriel0829
Multicellular
This whole Thrive thing seems pretty legit! Happy to give feedback!
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Post by gabriel0829 on Oct 27, 2017 2:06:12 GMT
gabriel0829 , yours are fine except you can't harvest stars. Do you want me to write an edited post and resubmit it? Or am I clear to go ahead and make the wiki page? Also what part of the star harvesting did you mean, the energy collector (Which would be like a Dyson Sphere or Dyson Ring sort of thing, just to clarify.) or the other part? (The part I think you might be talking about.)
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